For Future ReferenceEdit
In order to make the text appear, you actually should delete the arrows that you see in the Wiki coding. Those are just to prevent you from seeing the help text that is provided in the preload. When you actually want to see something, it helps to get rid of them. Plus, you also need to have the "(3.5e Whatever)" in front of the name of the article (except replace "Whatever" with the category of article you're making).
On one last note, I can't really be sure if this was your intent because of all the dashes caused by the arrows, but if this is supposed to be an LA +1 race as is I think you can knock it down to LA +0. This doesn't really have enough racial traits to be worthy of LA, especially since the -4 Con is a major buzzkill. And if it's -1, then there really is no such thing and it kind of has to be bumped to +0 by default if I'm not mistaken.
Hope this helps you in the future. - TG Cid 01:59, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
- I also filled in the creature type, since that was missing, as Humanoid. I hope this is intended as the "correct" thing, despite that they might (maybe) more closely be Monstrous Humanoids (due to having physical features that would make wearing humanoid armor difficult, but to note, not a big deal). Also, really, this isn't an LA+1 race. Was that intended to be ECL 1? ECL was missing too. Perhaps confusion? --Ganteka Future 00:02, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
- I filled in +1 because I didn't first consider the possibility that it was supposed to be a -1. Either way, I agree (as stated above) that this is fine as LA +0, probably even if you knock down the Con penalty to -2 given that the other abilities are pretty minor. - TG Cid 00:10, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah, totally. Changed. Still, I wish the flavor text wasn't so bland and sparse... --Ganteka Future