Getting Stuff To Show Up
You have to remove the <!-- and --> parts -- not just fill in between them. Surgo 23:07, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
- There, I fixed it for you. Surgo 23:14, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
- yea thanks :D I'm new at this :P --Chalto 23:57, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
- Mind taking a look while you're at it? check a nd tell me if you think it's too unfair?
- yea thanks :D I'm new at this :P --Chalto 23:57, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
Thoughts
I have concerns about any race that doesn't need to eat, sleep, breath, is immune to 'mundane' poisons like ginormous spider bites and whatnot, and gets a 2nd level spell 3 times a day out the door. The other stuff isn't great either. The limitations you've put on them to get away with this stuff without adding LA are pretty harsh but easy to get around, and just serve to make them a very swingy race. They will either be super awesome in a game because they're played by someone who has minimized their exposure to light (by being underground, going out at night, living in a basically-permanent item based deeper darkness, whatever) and has fire resistance / immunity somehow, or they'll be dead because they didn't do these things. Which is pretty bad for a race.
So I don't think it's unfair, but I don't think it's particularly well balanced either. I would pay the costs you've attempted to level on the race, and I wouldn't suffer under them at all because they're easy to work around, and I would gain way too much from it. This would make an ok monster base, but it looks like a terrible player race right now. - TarkisFlux 02:22, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
- yes that's about what i told him, (Chalto is my younger brother) i was also worried about whether or not there'd be a fair way to make a shadow race as he envisioned. i told him to post it here to see if anyone could offer suggestions on how to this race fair and playable. So anyone have any suggestions on how to level it out? --Azerinth 04:29, December 11, 2009 (UTC)