So, what type of creatures are allowed to take this template? The full list of creature types (not subtypes) is as follows: Animal, Humanoid, Vermin, Magical Beast, Fey, Undead, Aberration, Giant, Monstrous Humanoid, Dragon, Elemental, Ooze, Plant, Construct, and Outsider. [I forgot to sign this Havvy 04:15, June 3, 2010 (UTC)]
alright, I did my best to correct my problems with my new race and template. To be honest this is the first time I have ever created anything, besides the Prinny race but apparently it wasn't passable and someone else took it over from me. I'm still learning though, I just recently got into the DnD game.
Well, it seems to be workable. I have Savage Species with me right now, so I have a good number of example WotC templates to get the wording similar to. As such, I am making a lot of edits, but the final template should not be changed, minus the whole leadership as a feat to summon other heartless. I'm going to try re-mechanic-ing that to something similar to a summon spell or summon spell-like ability. Also, I changed one of your special abilities into a feat. I'm not sure what to do for the author template there, so decide whether you want to be attributed it or not. Havvy 04:15, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
yeah, a little help is always appreciated, thanks, and I saw the Feat. Yeah put my username on it, cuz it was from my template.
Problem with the lore and the template Edit
The problem with this template is that it does not fit the lore of "Kingdom Hearts." Xehanort isn't possessed by a Heartelss. He IS a heartless. 188.8.131.52 16:27, December 14, 2010 (UTC)