|Ganteka Future's Favor|
|This article has been favored and rated Good by Ganteka Future, for the following reasons: Good-enough article. Mechanics are straightforward, but solid. Nothing jumps out as "I wanna play this", and really, I think the whole article is reminiscent of that. The flavor is just a bit unmemorable. I just wish there were more of it. There has gotta be source material out there to play off of and build upon. A passable grade, but not by much.|
|This article has been favored and rated Good by DanielDraco, for the following reasons: Mechanically, I like it a lot. It lends itself well to a tank-type class, without being so very specialized that other classes are out of the question. The mechanics support the flavor, and they have more than just the usual ability modifiers and one other bonus. The only problem is that the bare-bones flavor makes this article far less notable than it could be, and as such I'm only giving it a "good" rating.|
Edit: The following commenter feels the race should also be rated "Good"."
It's really not a bad race in any way. You've kept things interesting without over-flavoring things, which is very nice. However, the stats seem to me a bit cluttered (for instance, being wiser than people think really would justify not giving it a -2. +2 seems a little unusual. Furthermore, as I assume you're basing this off of FFTA or FFTA2, the physical strength aspect could possibly be more noticeable. Well, that's all for now. --188.8.131.52 23:15, October 8, 2010 (UTC)